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Going Abroad

작성자: cnc36
작성일: 2019년 12월13일(금) 오후07:29
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I enjoy going abroad becoz it makes me happy. Travelling is one of the best thing in life. It help you learn more about different cultures around the world.

검은색:학생영작=> [Student's sentence]
파란색:수정문장=> [Corrected sentence]
빨간색:문법설명=> [Grammar explanation]
초록색:나은문장=> [Better sentence]


I enjoy going abroad becoz it makes me happy.
I enjoy going abroad because it makes me happy.
Be careful of your spelling of because - B-E-C-A-U-S-E.

Travelling is one of the best thing in life.
Travelling is one of the best things in life.
It should be "things", since you are choosing one thing from a group - you cannot choose one from a group of one.

It help you learn more about different cultures around the world.
It helps you learn more about different cultures around the world.
Your verb "help" should be in singular form. Keep in mind that a singular subject takes a singular verb.

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